Inspirational Video

  ://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B7r7YY_EO0A

This video really meant a lot to me; everything it tells its true, but (qualify) everything can be accomplished by doing a good work. Most importantly (emphasize) you can accomplish your dreams by doing what you love to do, for example (illustrate) your favorite hobbies; In contrast (contrast) if you do what you dont like to do, you will live unhappy and regreting about that decision, after all (concede) a person is happy fighting for their dreams.

Here are some tips to accomplish your goals:

First (add): Work hard  and be responsable in your duties, this will help you to be a person with manners.

Second (add): Have a clear goal in your mind, fight for it!

Both tips are equally important (compare)  in their own aspect, at this point (explain) you should take them into account if you want your dreams became real!

In conclusion (conclude) that video tells the daily life of a person, for what are they working for and what they want to be in a future. Working hard for your dreams would make you a succesful person and you would be able to change the world with your own hands.